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« on: April 30, 2008, 02:42:49 am » |
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the announcer, John Burton is standing on the entrance
burton: please welcome, Will The thrill, Caapppppttttttaaaiiinnn cccchhhaaaaaarrrrriiiisssssmmmmaaaaa!!!
will the thrill: Hi everyone, if you didnt hear my name I'm will the thrill, your damn stupid if you didnt catch that. But my nickname is captain charisma. I just want to talk to the fans, the staff and especially... The GM. I didnt come here to play silly ****, I came here for competition. Thats the only thing I want. There is a only handful of guys in that locker room that say the are devoted to this sport, the other half of them just want to wrestle for the money. Thats just not what i'm about. what i AM about is getting the job done in that ring. Hell, All i have to do is hit them with the charismafyer and they will be out cold. anybody want to come out to face the best in the company? No really i did not think anybody would.Proving I am the bestnot even big show can slam me to the mat. now, there is my title shot that I want granted, its for the WWE championship against triple H. come on gm, how about it?
burton: uhhh, I want to ask you a question, what proves your championship material?
will the thrill: what proves it? WHAT proves it well I will show you what proves it tonight I have an exhibition against scotty 2 hotty. and this
will takes the mic and slams it on burtons head and throws hem off the stage, burton is out..COLD!
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Drake
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« Reply #1 on: April 30, 2008, 04:36:56 am » |
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I wouldn't use that nick name...one its in use by a wrestler and two you have no charisma lol
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« Reply #2 on: April 30, 2008, 07:48:26 am » |
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Man it ain't essential for you to attack somebody in every RP you do you know...
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« Reply #3 on: April 30, 2008, 08:29:58 am » |
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Please write your stuff out in word and get some grammar... Also the random attack was so pointless and uneeded, made your RP stale and only 1 line longer. I wouldn't ever attack someone in an RP to be honest.
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« Reply #4 on: April 30, 2008, 09:57:47 am » |
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WWE Title shot... erm... since when were you in WWE?
And dont attack staff, really goes against 'Captain Charisma'
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« Reply #5 on: April 30, 2008, 01:47:07 pm » |
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I have used captain charisma at my school and in my BYW, people at my school call me captain charisma, Honestly.
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« Reply #6 on: April 30, 2008, 01:54:37 pm » |
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Do you go to Walton Leigh School?
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« Reply #7 on: April 30, 2008, 03:52:20 pm » |
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Do you go to Walton Leigh School?
LMFAO!
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« Reply #8 on: April 30, 2008, 04:00:55 pm » |
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I dont even need to know what or where that school is I know what its for(or have the feeling at least)
Dude I'm going to be real blunt with you....you have to have the least amount of charisma I have ever seen in rping. Like honestly I have a real hard time believing anyone calls a kid name Will The Thrill Captain Charisma ....really if I were you I'd go by the name Mr Cardboard....both you and cardboard are plain and boring it suits you well.
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« Reply #9 on: April 30, 2008, 04:02:25 pm » |
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I dont even need to know what or where that school is I know what its for(or have the feeling at least) It's a school for *special* kids
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« Reply #10 on: April 30, 2008, 06:22:28 pm » |
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burton: Caapppppttttttaaaiiinnn cccchhhaaaaaarrrrriiiisssssmmmmaaaaa!!!
^^^ WHAT THE **** You get away with one one letter being drawn out, not the whole freaking word, no wonder you had to let them know your name again. Dont attack randomly, write them in word, for god sake use capitials and full stops. And just learn to RP read the maon event rp's, have an idea. Will the Trill is an alright nick name anyway, bring in a second name and be known as Will 'The Trill' Rodgers or something
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« Reply #11 on: April 30, 2008, 06:29:08 pm » |
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You get away with one one letter being drawn out, not the whole freaking word, no wonder you had to let them know your name again.
Ya, I mean, I RP Kennedy, who's basically the king of doing that, and I still don't extend the name that long. However, I agree with Hoyt, bring in a second name, it's sound better. Drop Captain Charisma, and basically... just take the advice being given .
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« Reply #12 on: April 30, 2008, 09:30:58 pm » |
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Or
Will Thrilling
Something simpler and less... wel... n00by
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will the thrill
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the resone I dont rp charisma like is batista dosent have a lot of charisma. And edge, is hiw a caw and real wrestler place or just a real wrestler
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charismatic would be the word you are looking for and why not just be someone else then......
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